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【一】:2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)
2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)
一. 用词准确;表达地道
【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)
美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。
注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
home, so like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking in our or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充
该校请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回
l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers,
just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩
【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class” 注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 April 12 is memorable because our class had a on that day. In the of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名师点评】
与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
【试题回放】开放作文
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we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
【名师点评】
本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。
三. 复合句为写作增色
【全国卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter watching hbirthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：
1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.;5.;6.合适的结尾。
达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句
积累卡片英汉互译
好词 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育
好句I’d like a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard 正是你们的努力工作让苏
全国卷II】【试题回放】
写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米;
2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。 注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!www.fz173.com_2016山东省高考英语满分作文。
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms,
with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名师点评】
本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。
【重庆卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给 自我介绍
得知的情况
表示鼓励
打算为她做什么
祝她早日康复
注意：
1. 2.
3. 词数100 4. Dear Amy,
I’m you got the lung cancer you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。
积累卡片
好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠
我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。
好处：which引导限制性定语从句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!
好处：掷地有声，语言准确。
四. 结构清晰,句式准确
【江苏卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
u 每天锻炼一小时
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿， 注意：www.fz173.com_2016山东省高考英语满分作文。
1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、 词数：120
3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动—— 教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was 00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
though our Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do now!
本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。
积累卡片
好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。
评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。
好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.
【二】:2016年高考英语满分作文范文(经典打印版)
2016年高考英语满分作文范文（经典打印版）
2016高考英语满分作文范文及翻译（1）
健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。
提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车;www.fz173.com_2016山东省高考英语满分作文。
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳;
3.饮食要健康;
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑;
2.80—100词左右;
3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
【例文】
Dear Dad(Mum),
You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have
healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
【翻译】
亲爱的爸爸(妈妈)，
你每天这么忙，你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡，是吗?为什么不步行到办公室吗?你最好锻炼，每周至少一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是，它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。
爸爸，请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康!
您的爱子(女)
汤姆(玛丽)
2016高考英语满分作文范文及翻译（2）
请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲：
(1) 家乡的地理位置;
【三】:2016年高考英语写作满分作文范文必备
2016年高考英语写作满分作文范文必备
第1篇 学校开设国际课程介绍）
The international curriculum，which consists of (is made up of) three groups, New York Class, Washington Class, and Toronto Class, will start in our school next term. All of the students in these three classes will take America's high school courses to be taught ( with the guidance of /under sb's guidance) by teachers from New York, America. The courses include English language, Mathematics, Reading, Science, and Audio-visual lessons. We have already been told that all the 8 classes a day are taught in English.
About the accommodation, the living conditions are quite good, so four students will share one room.
第2篇 读写任务 评论父母的教育方式
（概述1）Although both of her daughters are being raised in America, Ms Chua treats them strictly as many Chinese parents treat their children. She has high expectations of them and treat them in a strict manner. Some criticism has arisen from this parenting style in American parents.(This has brought some criticism from American parents.)(w:46)
（ 概述2） In America Ms Chua writes a book causing a heated discussion about parenting. Ms Chua is very strict with and has high expectations of her two daughters. She treats them as many Chinese parents treat their children. This has brought some different comments. (W:43) （概述3） Although both of her daughters are being raised in America, Ms Chua treats them as many Chinese parents treat their children. She has high expectations of them and treat them in a strict manner. This has brought some criticism from American parents. (W:42)
（概述4）Ms Chua, living in America with her two daughters , published a book about her strict parenting style and it has caused a heated debate about cultural differences in parenting. different people have different opinions towards her parenting style. (W:29 +9)
（概述5） The passage tells us that a new book written by Amy Chua caused a debate about parenting. Some people critized Amy and others thought it was a traditional parenting way in China. （W:32）
（概述6） The passage tells us about Ms Chua, who is strict with her children . She would threaten and insult her children if they don't meet her expectations. Her behavior has caused a debate about the way of parenting.
（概述7） In Amy Chua's new book on parenting, she writes that she is very strict with her daughters and has a high expectation of them. However, this cultural differences in parenting has caused a debate.
简述你或你周围人的父母的教育方式
Just like Ms Chua, my parents also treat me strictly. They have planned the future for me — to be a pianist. Therefore, they designed a training course for me, forced me to practise whenever I had spare time, and required me to take various exams. They seldom allowed me to do any other active activities except practise the piano. What’ worse, they even tell me not to go to bed before 12 at night. There is a similar situation about my studies. I am always forced to do something.
你认为这种教育方式是否正确
To be frank, I hate such a parenting style. It makes me lose interest in anything, and it makes me unhappy. In the long term, I don’t think it will be good for my mental health. However, I love my parents very much, so try my best to do whatever they want me to. Now I am good at playing the piano and I also have good achievements in my studies. Although I hate the parenting style of my parents, I understand them.
假设你是一名家长，你会怎样教育你的子女
If I were a parent, I wouldn't use this strict parenting style. Instead, I would choose the western style of parenting. I would find out the children’s interests and allow them to learn what they
【四】:2016年山东省高考作文
2016山东卷高考作文
山东卷作文：我的行囊
阅读下面的材料，根据自己的感悟和联想，写一篇不少于800字的文章。 行囊已经备好，开始一段新的旅程。路途漫漫，翻检行囊会发现，有的东西很快用到了，有的暂时用不上，有的想用而未曾准备，有的会一直伴随我们走向远方......
要求：①选准角度，自定立意；②自拟题目；③除诗歌外，文体不限；④文体特征鲜明。
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