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2015高考英语满分作文【一】:2015年高考英语满分作文赏析
2015年高考英语满分作文赏析
【安徽卷高考英语】【试题回放】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况,请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：
l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。 复合句为写作增色
【全国卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：
1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。
这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育
好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。
【高考英语全国卷II】【试题回放】
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米;
2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。 注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名师点评】
本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。
【重庆卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括： 自我介绍
得知的情况
表示鼓励
打算为她做什么
祝她早日康复
注意：
1. 信的格式已为你写好
2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。
积累卡片
好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠
好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。
好处：which引导限制性定语从句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!
好处：掷地有声，语言准确。
结构清晰,句式准确
【江苏卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
u 每天锻炼一小时
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情
况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：
1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!
Thank you!
【名师点评】
本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。
积累卡片
好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。
评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。
好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. 如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。
评析：虚拟语气。
2015高考英语满分作文【二】:2010-2015高考英语满分作文
(2014) 假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的
注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）
.
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：住宿-accommodation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student from China.
I’ve read the advertisement on the Internet and would like to attend
the three-week courses you offer during the summer vacation. I am writing to ask more information about it.
First of all, I’d like to know when the class starts and how many students there are in a class. Second, how many hours do we learn per week? Third, how much do we have to pay for the three-week courses? Besides, how many types of accommodation do you provide? I’d prefer a quiet room where I can sleep alone. Can you meet my demand?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully
Li Hu
2013新课标卷I
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜
航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle, Li Ming is going to attend a meeting in your city and then he will bring you the Chinese painting (that) you’ve asked for before.
My uncle’s flight, whose number is CA985, will arrive at your city at 11:30 on the morning of August 6. As my uncle is not familiar with your city, I would appreciate it if you could meet him at the airport.
I do hope that you can also take him to his hotel. My uncle is a tall man with glasses, wearing a black jacket.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：
1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)
3. 希望获准。
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning from the Internet that you’ll have a summer camp in Singapore, I, Li Hua, a middle school student from China, am interested in it. Students from different countries are welcome, so I hope I can take part in it. Having been learning English for ten years, I can speak English fluently and accurately. I believe that by joining in the camp, I’ll be able to tell students from foreign countries about China and that of course, I can learn about their countries. Could you please accept me as a member of your summer camp?
Looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1．本人简介： 2．求助内容； 3．约定时间；
4. 你的联系方式(Email：lihua@1236. com；Phone：12345678)。
I’m a student named Li Hua. I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.
Now I’d like to tell you something about my problem. Last night, I lost my ID card in our campus, which really makes me worried. As you know, the ID card means a lot to me. I am now at a loss what to do next and eager to get some help. I’m free on Saturdays.
My phone number is 12345678. You could also reach me through email and my email address is .
At last, I’d appreciate it if you could take my appointment into consideration. Regards,
Li Hua
(2011) Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and find may courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email
12345678.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
2010 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委，请参照以下比赛通知给她写一份信.
2015高考英语满分作文【三】:2015年高考英语写作高分答题模板及范文
2015年高考英语写作高分答题模板及范文——提纲作文
提纲可以是汉语提示，也可能以英语提示或者中文提示加图画的形式出现；可能是有具体写作内容，也可能是只言片语的简单提示，或者要求考生自己发挥的半开放式提示。
一、题型解读
提纲式作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，让考生据此进行写作。提纲作文一般会提供标题、提纲要点和首句，从而将考生的写作控制在一定范围内。 常见的提纲作文有两种：一种是中文提纲，另一种是英文提纲。
二、写作攻略
提纲类书面表达不是将写作要点简单地逐条翻译，而是根据情景的发展，按照一定的顺序组织安排好写作材料，然后用比较通顺的语言表达出这些内容要点。
第一步：认真审题，明确文体形式，确定文章主题；
第二步：围绕主题，选择材料。根据提纲，构思文章内容；
第三步：按照一定的顺序开始写作（提出问题——找原因，给论据——提出措施，进行总结），注意内容的连贯性以及逻辑性。
Nowadays, there are more and more (问题). It is estimated that (举例).
Why have there been so many (问题)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that (原因一).Besides, (原因二). The third reason is (原因三). To sum up, the main cause is due to (总结).
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