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i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（一）：
高中英语短文改错,10个,大小写不算,i often quarrel about my mother over whether i can watch tv after school .she holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons .it seems to me that once i am allowed to do that ,i"ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study .she also thinks it is bad for my eye .but i really can"t accept her ideas .in my opinion ,watch tv can set my mind at rest after a day"s hard works .besides ,it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad .thus ,we shouldn "t be forbidden to watch tv .
刚好十处错误!绝对准确! I often quarrel (with) my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds (the) view that senior three students have to make (full) use of every minute to work hard ...
i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（二）：
| 短文改错（10%）。 I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She hold the view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.t— |
| 1. about ---with 2. hold---holds 3. fully---full 4.me---her 5. unable---be unable 6. eye---eyes 7. had---has 8 at abroad---abroad |
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i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（三）：
高一短文改错题I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that,I"ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks it is had for my eye.But I really can"t accept her ideas.In my opinin,watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day"s hard wprks.Besides,it"s important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad.Thus,we should"t be forbidden to watch TV.
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I often quarrel (about改为with) my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.She holds (加入the) view that senior three students have to make (fully改成full) use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.It seems to (me改成her) that once I am allowed to do that,I"ll (加入be) unable to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks it is bad for my (eye改为eyes).But I really can"t accept her ideas.In my opinion,(watch改为watching) TV can set my mind at rest after a day"s hard (works改成work).Besides,it"s important for us to know what (had改为has) happened at home and (去掉at) abroad.Thus,we shouldn"t be forbidden to watch TV.
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i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（四）：
英语改错：I often quarrel with my mother about if I can watch ＿TV after school.I often quarrel with my mother about if I can watch ＿TV after school.
应该为：I often quarrel with my mother for my watching TV after school.
i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（五）：
| 短文改错（满分10分） I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV. |
| I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. with She holds∧ view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute the full to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, her I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad be for my eye . But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my eyes watching mind at rest after a day’s hard works . Besides, it is important for us to know what  workhad happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV. has |
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i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（六）：
求英语作文 经常为看电视和妈妈闹意见,今天跟妈妈达成一致 ,以 An Argument为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文 母亲：1.高三以学习任务重,看电视浪费时间.2.自制力差3.久看电视会影响视力.我：1.学习一天很疲劳,看电视可以放松一下2.看电视可以增长知识,了解国际大事,紧跟时代.3.平时不准看电视,但在周末允许看新闻、体育或科普类节目. An Agreement
I am a senior three student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in senior three, shouldering heavy loads, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that＇ once I am allowed to do that
I＇ll not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can＇t accept her ideas. I think it a relaxation to watch TV after a day＇s hard work. Watching TV can not only relax me, but broaden my horizons. Now we"ve at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news,programs of entertainment, sports or science.
i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（七）：
短文改错,为什么错高中英语短文改错,10个,大小写不算,
i often quarrel about my mother over whether i can watch tv after school .she holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons .it seems to me that once i am allowed to do that ,i"ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study .she also thinks it is bad for my eye .but i really can"t accept her ideas .in my opinion ,watch tv can set my mind at rest after a day"s hard works .besides ,it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad .thus ,we shouldn "t be forbidden to watch tv .要详细理由,
1.about 改成with 与...某人争论 2.view 前面加 the 3.fully 改成full make full use of 充分利用...
4.i 和 am 调换位置...once 是状语 状语提前 需要半倒装 5.eye 改成eyes 双眼 6.ideas 改成idea 它是不可数名词.7.watch 改成watching watching tv 作句子主语.8.works 改成works work在句子中为不可数.9.had 改成、have 句子中 应该是国内国外所发生的事情,不应该用过去完成时,而是现在完成时态,因为是过去到现在看电视时发生的事情,而不是过去到过去发生的事情.10.unable 前加be 应该是 i will be unable to unble 是形容词 前面要加系动词.
i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（八）：
| Recently I have been quarrel ling about my mother over whether I can watch TV after the school. She holds the view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lesson. It seem to her that I am allowed to watch TV, I won’t be able to control me and I’ll forget all about my studies. She also thinks that it is bad to my eyes. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard work. Besides, it is important for me to know what had happened both at home and abroad. However, I shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV. |
| 小题1:about—with 小题2:school前the去掉 小题3:fully—full 小题4:lesson—lessons 小题5:that和I 之间加if或once 小题6:me—myself 小题7:to—for 小题8:watch—watching 小题9:had—has 小题10:However—Thus/Therefore/So |
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i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（九）：
I often quarrel about my mother 怎么改成正确的啊【i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.】about改成with
i,often,quarrel,about,my,mother,over,whether,i,can,watch,tv,afterschool.（十）：
英语作文look at my family (有中文),要把当时1.My family
Home,what a familiar word,in my opinion,home is just a house,is where the family home.However," family" is different," family" it is with their loved ones composed of a collective.
My family is a big family,we have three generations living together.Our family is a lot,life has been simple,plain,is not like other families,full of laughter.
Previously,every morning,mom and dad busy work,no time to take care of the daily diet,in addition to dinner,I almost every day in the school cafeteria to eat,Grandpa,grandma know,it deliberately moved from the home from a day,I"m ready for the meal,so that I can eat delicious food home.
Grandfather grandmother came after,idle hands from time to time,every day we rub washing,mother is afraid of two old tired,on the early work of the stem have finished two,but he can always find out what work to do.My mother often persuades them to say:" Dad.Mom,you can"t do,these live I to dry on the line." To Grandpa.Grandmother said:" the two of you go to work every day so tired,come back to do the work,how busy,I am idle is idle,do what is the right number!" But,Dad.Mom is very obedient,every month for grandpa grandma add several new what,so I have envied.
Every night,we are together.Daddy"s always on the study in his file,grandma and mother together as we make up some clothes what.Grandpa is reading the newspaper or find the old man playing chess.I was watching my tv.Although we are all doing things,but our ears often came a sound discourse of concern,such as:grandma often says to me:" don"t watch TV eat too much snacks,prone to indigestion or stop watching TV for a long time,is bad for the eyes." Mom and dad often to grandfather grandma said:"Dad,mom.You don"t get up so late,go to sleep." ......
Although the flat of my family life,but among the highlights from this plain,harmony and happiness,this is my family,an ordinary family.
2." My family"
My family is the Chinese society many ordinary families in a,a harmonious happy and warm family of four:father,mother,brother and me.
Father for many years engaged in educational work.The former has worked as a secondary school teacher,director; now is still a middle school leadership work.In my memory my father every day is very busy.Dad"s character,integrity,work not swayed by personal considerations.His serious in speech and manner,often makes me feel fear.In addition to work outside,his greatest interest and hobby is reading and collecting stamps.Business trip,his bag is always a few more on the new book (literature,history,philosophy aspect); father"s interest in stamp collecting as a birthright,early in the primary school when he began to collect stamps,now has nearly 10000pieces.The stamps will be arranged and hidden from his album.
Mother and father,also an educator -- for many years engaged in basic education of primary school teachers.In school,she hot Aimoto work,a strong sense of responsibility; at home she is a loving mother,life without micro does not take care of us; on the road of life often lead us to read some good books,help us correct attitude towards life.Mother"s character and lively,cheerful,likes to sing.Ignorance is the cradle of the normal school teachers -- made her such a character,or the character that she eventually chose primary school teacher this occupation.
Now,mom and dad has entered the ranks of middle-aged,but in the reform and opening up a good situation,their spirit is even more exciting,but also more energy.
My brother and I is the home of the central figure,is a father and mother of a pearl in the palm; one is their baby.They told us about to,but never let us the shortcomings and defects.Brother talent well,reading day,he likes mathematics,more like football,sometimes also affect the study,father often to be good at giving systematic guidance teaching.
My interest and my brother very different.Dad made me to be learned in books,literature has generated strong interest,mother"s music quality,and I am particularly sensitive to music,based on this character and for many years the influence of family environment,when I graduated when he decided to apply for a normal school.
I live in the south,a residential building to be unnoticed corner,but in my heart,was so warm - he give me love,give me joy,because there is a father"s care,my mother"s love,brother of innocence.
My family,is the ordinary one,is an ordinary family in an.
" My family"
In my white walls are hung a" family" and a" five-virtue family " awards.One of the" family",or father deliberately photographic master to come in the home as it!Six people smile,who will read like.
Look,sitting in the middle of the kind old man is my grandmother.The grandmother is 82 years old this year,despite her photos very rich,in fact,life can be hard!More than 40years her husband dead,more than 50 years old and dead son,at the age of 80,three son,youngest son has died of illness,had four men and two women "s grandmother to now only a heart disease by two sons and two daughters.Aunt,father and mother afraid grandma does not stand for this blow,in order to let her have a comfortable old age,two uncles died has been telling her.For three years,why not have a son to see her,it,grandmother also live in a drum.This old man was irritable,often automatic speaking,angry and scolding.Recently,the grandmother"s leg unfortunate fracture,pain and to his son,the old man home be subject to changing moods,sometimes called the name of his son crying,sometimes to mom and dad called and called.Alas,she is really poor!
See,sit in the grandmother left middle-aged man,is my father.There they sit together ." Jin,you must be mistaken for this is mother.Really,really father treated grandmother than son which also pro.He is an ambitious and kind-hearted man.Father in the supply and marketing cooperatives is an excellent worker,at home,neighbors who do not stretch thumb!In particular,this ill grandmother,visits to the hospital diagnosis is father into her arms out,after coming home,and mother together and circadian nursing,feeding water feeding end end urine,feces.Is grandma be furious to be son cannot when,still like a kid like coaxed granny,until her anger subsided.Later,he was afraid of mother body collapsed,simply their own care grandmother.Grandma "s disease in a better,while father is day by day away.
Look,sit on the right is my grandmother that when primary school teacher mother.My mother is a hothead,but we all know that her mouth is a knife,tofu heart.Sometimes she cries,took her to cry.But still she tears the homemade fried egg noodles soup to the old house up to.You don"t see her to buy their own things to buy goods,can give grandma bought generous!Fruit,milk powder,Royal jelly ......Grandma what to eat,all available hand.
You should ask the grandmother behind the three man,of course is the elder brother,sister and me.My brother is an auto mechanic; sister is a technical secondary school; I was a pupil.Although we only separated by several years,but never to quarrel,what can discuss to go.He said the grandmother hurt it,brother to see mom and dad busy tired look,he secretly took my sister and me to call together and help my parents to do something.So we decided for parents siblings:brother night nursing sister,grandmother; each week to wash clothes,clean a house; I,sweeping the floor,washing dishes ......All inclusive.Sunday we also forced the mom and dad have a rest day,learn what they do,coaxed granny smiled and said:" good child,white did not hurt you!" Mom and Dad see this scene,was pleased to laugh,our heart is sweet