2014年英语高考满分作文

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2014年英语高考满分作文(共8篇)

2014年英语高考满分作文（一）：

一、雅安抗震救灾 　　2013年4月20日,四川省雅安市芦山发生强烈地震,造成很大损失.学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款.请你拟一个发言稿,在学校捐款动员大会上使用.发言稿主要内容应包括：　　1.对灾区情况的简单介绍（包括地震发生时间、地点、造成的财产和人员损失等）； 　　2.捐款的意义（帮助灾区人民渡过难关、帮助灾区重建）； 　　3.如何捐款（自愿、多少不限、以班级为单位,收齐后交到学校红十字会） 　　注意：　　1.不要逐条翻译； 　　2.可适当增加细节；以使文章连贯； 3.词数至少100词.参考范文：Dear teachers and students,　　As we all know,a terrible earthquake happened in Lushan,Sichuan Province on April 20,in which many buildings were destroyed and many people were injured.In order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown,the school has called on everyone in our school,including both teachers and students,to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area.This donation is voluntary.You can give away however much you want to.The money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the Red Cross Society of our school.We hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help our fellow men out of the difficulty.Thank you.二、中国梦 　　最近,你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动.请写一篇日记,记述班会情况及自己的感受.内容要点如下：　　1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解； 　　2.你谈到了自己的梦想； 　　3.如何实现自己的梦想.　　注意：　　1.总词数不少于100.　　2.不可逐条翻译.　　3.开头已给出,不计入总词数.　　参考范文：　　April 8 Monday Fine Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.Inspired by（受启发）President Xi’s Chinese Dream,everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.　　I also talked about my own dream.I have always wanted to be a doctor.Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they aredoing a respectable（值得尊敬的） job.Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge（专业知识）.To realize my dream,I must try to work hard from now on.I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college,where I can prepare myself adequately（充分） for the job of a doctor.Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

2014年英语高考满分作文（二）：

　　[广东卷]
　　【试题回放】假设你是下图的李华.请根据图画所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文,描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等.)
　　注意：1. 词数：80―120
　　2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程
　　About 9 o"clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn"t go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.
　　I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework."
　　“Oh, I"m really sorry to have disturbed you. We"ll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.
　　“Thank you very much..” I said and went back to continue my study.
　　[名师点评]
　　这篇文章从整体上来看,内容完整,要点齐全.在准确领悟题意的基础上,用平实的语言,将文章娓娓道来,连贯而流畅.句式搭配长短结合.文章对对话的描写,很生动,让人有种身临其境的感觉.
　　（编辑：精品学习网）【2014年英语高考满分作文】

2014年英语高考满分作文（三）：

江西省高考英语作文部分评分标准：1.字数不够扣二分 2.书写较差至以至于影响交际会将分数降低一个层次 （扣2~5分） 3.应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求16～20分
所以一般人应在17分左右,望采纳

2014年英语高考满分作文（四）：

what we want is to build up our level of English study,we can also improve our ways of learning.
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now,we hope that you can give your posts to us ,what we need are those posts which are close to our daily life ,what"s more we will choose some excelent posts to publish on the column “English Writing”,we not noly give you some remuneration but alos some our teachers" opinions of your posts,that will help you improve your writing level.
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2014年英语高考满分作文（五）：

Dear Mr Smith,
I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t join in the outing that you will organize(一般将来时) on Sunday morning.I broke my foot yesterday afternoon,when I was playing basketball with my friends.I will have to stay in bed for several days till it recovers.(将来完成时),It is a great pity for me to miss such a good chance to spend time with you. I (最好不用would,虚拟语气表示不真实的,如果你这里用虚拟语气,别人觉得你很假)will be very happy if you could give me your kind understanding. And I hope you will have a good（最好用happy吧,） time.
句子结尾用 your sincerely
li hua(随便写的名字)
这就是高考作文的基本套路了,还有注意断句,标点,不要一个句子写到尾,随时要断句.不然阅卷老师费解,没什么大的语法错误,得18分应该没问题,主要是你结尾没落款写信人的名字.

2014年英语高考满分作文（六）：

挺不错的.至少能拿个20分以上,要我打可能23左右.基本意思表达很好,语法和单词也不错,但是就是有些用法稍微有点感觉怪怪的.（别嫌我啊）
就这两句
“ Despite the discouragement, I tried to get mother"s supportness” change to "Despite her disapproval, I tried to get her support."
"as the college entrance exam draws nearer and nearer." change to "draws near"
"my eagerness to join in them grows stronger and stronger" personally speaking, I would use the word “my interest in these clubs grows stronger and stronger"
"showed her understanding to me" change to ”showed understanding“
还有,用Mum好像更好啊,难道您整天管妈妈叫 "母亲”么?

2014年英语高考满分作文（七）：

我六级516,不高,研究生英语一72分（满分100）,
对于作文,我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路!你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文,拿来背背,你就成为高手了,其实大错特错!因为我看了之后也觉得一般,甚至有些拙劣,哗众取宠的味道,比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 这样低等的写作词汇,说它低等,那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知,阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了!
要写出高人一等的作文,我觉得并不难,只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好）,写作句型,就足可以应对常规的高考,四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别,四六级的作文都是110多分）
首先是语法,在你的语法达到一定层次之后,你就可以追求更多的变化了,比如,用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……,又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等,这样可以增加你的语法亮点,让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮,在你的试卷上多扫射一番!
其次,是词汇,我觉得,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive,innumerable,a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at ,却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上!
再次,是怎么将文章润色,从而使你的文章大放异彩!关于这方面,我觉得我自己使用最多的,也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”,包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词,在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词,在过去分词前加入副词,在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……,总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词.我觉得这样做有一个好处,那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满,比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part,the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子.

2014年英语高考满分作文（八）：

没看评分标准，但感觉这作文不错，尤其第一段用词能给人良好的第一印象，如无字数限制方面的考虑，我看至少给你18分。当然作文评分很主观的，完全因评委而异，

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