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短文改错
.___,he,got,out,of,the,car(篇一)
(2014届黑龙江省哈三中高三上学期第三次验收) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 .只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.
【答案】
1.去掉that
2. town改成 towns
3. particularly 改成particular 4. which改成where
5. were改成are
6. have与child之间加a
7. with water 改成 of water
8. teaching改成taught
9. with改成without
10. him改成himself
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（2014届浙江省温州中学高三上学期期中）
Dear Mr. Black,
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your pla ce in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in th e country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find dif ficult to refuse her request. I’m busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Ying
【答案】
1. thank改为thankful
2. come改为coming
3. dreamed改为dreaming
4. And改为But5ykj.com
5. 去掉in
6. she改为who 7. too改为so
8. find后面加it
9. in改为at
10. planned改为plan 3
(2014届浙江省浙北名校联盟高三上学期期中联考)
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一 词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起）不计分。
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advice. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people.
【答案】
1. devote → devoted
2. practise → practicing
3. great → greatly
4. 去掉to。
5. that → what
6. sometime →sometimes 7. myself → me
8. for和long 之间加a。
9. more → much
10. opinion → opinions
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（2013-2014学年内蒙古包头市一中高三入学考试）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词 的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor.” Said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “I said
you should check yours motor.” The horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat wha t I often s ay.
【答案】
1. cars改成car
2. tried→trying
3. the→a
4. surprising→surprised
5. something→anything
6. yours→ your 7. With →In 8. the farmer∧had →what
9. therefore→however
10. didn’t→doesn’t 5
（2014届浙江省江山实验中学高三上学期第一次阶段性测试）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and inter ested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
【答案】
1. real--really
2. weekend--weekends
3. times--time
4. 去掉a
5. 去掉much
6. and--but
7. his--their
8. interested--interesting
9. us∧have
10. see--seeing
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（2014届浙江省湖州市八校高三上学期第二次联考）
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening. 【答案】
1. so—because
2. look—looking
3. 加the
4. am—was
5. 去掉to
6. danger--dangerous
7. glass--glasses
8. something---anything
9. for--as 10. frightening—frightened 7新*课*标*第*一*网
（2014届云南省部分名校高三第一次联考（11月）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they firs t arrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can’t deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. That’s a problem if they can’t speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying.
【答案】
1. troubles改为trouble。
2. arrive后加in。
3. Therefore改为However。
4. alone改为lonely。
5. he改为they。 6. quick改为quickly。 7. may be depend on中删去be。 8. other前加the。
9. began改为begin。
10. satisfying改为satisfied。
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（2014届黑龙江哈师大附中高三上学期期中）
【答案】
1. shall---should
2. specially---special
3. responding to
4. the best
5. appreciation 6. will prefer ---prefer 7. which---what
8. bringing 9. means
10. ourselves
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（2014届河北省衡水中学高三上学期四调考试）
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
Dear Joe,
Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to k now you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.
Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.
Yours truly
Li Hua
【答案】
1. you→your
2. that→which
3. 在“get”后面加a或experienc→experiences
2015高考英语一轮短文改错复习题有解析
.___,he,got,out,of,the,car(篇二)
高考短文改错
1 As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 【答案】
1. thank改为thankful 2. come改为coming 3. dreamed改为dreaming 4. And改为But5. 去掉in 6. she改为who
7. too改为so 8. find后面加it 9. in改为at10. planned改为plan 3 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water. 【答案】
1.去掉that 2. town改成 towns 3. particularly 改成particular 4. which改成where 5. were改成are 6. have与child之间加a 7. with water 改成 of water 8. teaching改成taught 9. with改成without 10. him改成himself 2
Dear Mr. Black,
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you. Best wishes. Yours truly, Li Ying
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all
my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advice. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people. 【答案】
1. devote → devoted 2. practise → practicing 3. great → greatly 4. 去掉to。 5. that → what 6. sometime →sometimes
7. myself → me 8. for和long 之间加a。 9. more → much 10. opinion → opinions 4
A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor.” Said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor.” The horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He
1
explained, “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say. 【答案】
1. cars改成car 2. tried→trying 3. the→a 4. surprising→surprised 5. something→anything 6. yours→ your 7. With →In8. the farmer∧had →what 9. therefore→however 10. didn’t→doesn’t 5
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! 【答案】
1. real—really 2. weekend—weekends 3. times--time 4. 去掉a 5. 去掉much 6. and—but 7. his--their 8. interested—interesting 9. us∧have 10. see--seeing 6
I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see
something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening. 【答案】
1. so—because 2. look—looking 3. 加the 4. am—was 5. 去掉to 6. danger--dangerous 7. glass—glasses 8. something---anything 9. for--as 10. frightening—frightened 7
People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first arrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can’t deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. That’s a problem if they can’t speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying. 【答案】
1. troubles改为trouble。 2. arrive后加in。3. Therefore改为However。 4. alone改为lonely。5. he改为they。6. quick改为quickly。
7. may be depend on中删去be。8. other前加the。9. began改为begin。 10. satisfying改为satisfied。 8 Dear Joe,
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Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.
Join in the camp and you wil
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